Thanks mum. You did fabulous. We lived with like twins, for three decades, daring to breathe. Mummy, I give much love to you, may you live longer to see my fortunes, God will hear me pray, and give me prosperity. I adore your work well done, the way you raised me. Mum taught me how to live with other people. I have to praise. Also, you gave me freedom and how to relate. There are many enemies around us. They want to pull us apart, but you stand in my right, you say I’ll never go. So mummy, the telephone is open. The voices can warm the heart. Many like you Mummy, the villagers like your attitude, so I love you mummy.
The poem is an imitation of the poem Daddy by Sylvia Plath (1981). I chose the poem because it teaches many people on how to live and treat others. It also outlines the consequences of inappropriate relation between parents and their siblings, also between two lovers.
Plath in her poem was addressing to her father, in contrast my poem addresses my mum. The first line of the second stanza of Plath’s poem is the one motivated me to say otherwise. She tells her father she will kill him. In mine, it addresses mum how I love her.
Plath used similes in the first stanza especially when she wrote about living again like a black shoe. This means that she will be free from the father’s harassment. In my poem, I have also used similes to show how we have lived like the twins do, loving one another.
The poem “Daddy” has acted as a framework of my work. Its main theme was to address the female mistreatment by males. Gender inequality and respect being the main factors to the problems female face. It is ironic and attractive when Plath exposes the start of the problems. She used the father and lovers to represent the rest who mistreat other people. It is exactly the case in my poem; I have used my mother to represent how to love one another. In my poem, it shows my mum's approach to others, please many people in the society, but it has to start from her toes. Not far but from the own home responsibilities.
Both poems have a similarity of gender equality and how we treat others. They conclude by consequences. In the second line of the last stanza, Plath concludes that the father was no longer liked by the people in the village. The inclusion of the villagers in my poem represents the society, but in contrast, they like mum. This is as a result of how she treats other people other than her children.
The similarity also occurred between both poems when Plath writes in thirteenth stanza that the voices cannot warm the hearts of the father and his daughter, so there is no need to use the phone to solve the issues. This is because of anger in the daughter’s heart for mistreatment. I have also used the telephone in the poem to show how beneficial the phone can play. It can enhance the communication to the mum hence warming the hearts due to love.
There is a contrast between the Plath’s poem and mine as it touches the addressed speaker’s life. The speaker in the Plath’s poem prays for the death of the father for his wrong doing, but the speaker on my poem prays the life of the mother to be longer, in order to see the fortunes of many people in the society.
In summary, both poems have the same themes as they address the issue of gender inequality and mistreatments. They act to mentor many people for better relations to others. Even to the children if one is a parent and to the adults if you are a child. In this, the issues of harassment would be over in the community.